In my opinion many people still believe in super natural things because it is very hard for them to change their mindset about this. What I mean is we are all surrounded by culture of supernatural from the beginning of our lives. All the fairy tales we were told many books we read and many films we watch contain something that does not exist. We are just used to thinking those things are real from our childhood and even though science proved it all to be not real many times deeply inside some of us still believe it or question it's existence. Overall I think that the reason of so many people believing in supernatural is being raised in culture full of it.
Sports have been with us pretty much since the begining of our civilization but now became bigger than ever before. Nowdays we can watch a game of football for example that is being played tousands of kilometers away. That's amazing because we are able to expirience sports like never until now and that's cool. But to me what is cooler is the phenomenon of cheering for sombody or some team. I think it is special because we don't know those people in person, we don't know who they really are like but still, we take time out of our day to spend it watching them compete with others. This is in my opinion the true magic of sports. Not the competition or the fact that you can win something etc. But the fact that it truly unites people from all countries, parts of the globe, from different cultures and religions. It just doesn't have any boundaries and that is what makes it so magical and special.
A good paragraph. It might help the reader if you used commas, e.g. in this sentence: "All the fairy tales we were told (....) many books we read and many films we watch contain something that does not exist. " The following sentence, on the other hand, goes on and on. If you use long sentences, make sure their internal logic is absolutely clear.
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